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Aonani swayed the torch. Cari glared at her. “Stop it!” she hissed. Aonani rolled her eyes. “Nothings going to happen.” But it didn’t help that Cari was on edge. She wasn’t usually scared of the dark. She loved the dark actually. They were exploring a cave they had never seen before.  She also didn’t really like […]

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Charles

Fact #1:  Who is the main character? Laurie and Charles, What does he or she look like? Laurie wears blue jeans and a cap. Charles does not wear a jacket. Can you describe your character’s personality? Charles is a trouble maker Fact #2:  What does your character want more than anything Laurie wants to act older and more mature. […]

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Eleven

Ideas The writer is writing about a girl who is eleven but she does not feel eleven. It is her birthday today. And a red sweater that does not belong to her. Organization The writer pulls us in by using emotion and real life language. Voice The writer reveals emotion by repeating the same words. […]

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The best day of my life

My brother, mum and myself were bored one Sunday so decided to go to the trampoline park which was called three sixty. When we arrived I ran in and there were trampolines everywhere. I took off my shoes and just started jumping. I looked to my right and there is was an air bag. Most trampoline […]

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